O I haven't completed this short story I started a week or two ago, but I would like some opinions none the less :) Merci Murdoch. It's just that you ...re the first person to offer to help me in weeks. I was just overcome with happiness!" That's OK, just tell me what I can do first to help you." I"m Alice Wilkerson and I'm not hurt. I hit a rock and broke the wheel on my wagon. I have a spare wheel, but I'm not strong enough to put it on by myself. Can you help me?" I'll be pleased to help, and there'll be a few more men along in a few minutes to help, too. Where's the spare wheel?" It's tied to the wagon on the. I tried deep breathing and that helped a little. But the unnatural took its course and I heard David's bed start to squeak through the wall.I listened for a moment and then heard Sandy start to moan and squeal.I was so frustrated, I felt like crying. I pulled the covers over me, put a pillow over my head and curled up into a ball. Sometime later, I fell asleep.***Walking down a dark street, I tried to see the houses, but none of their lights were on. I turned the corner at the end of the street. "I know. Thank you." She said, and Erin shook her head. "Don't thank me yet." She said, and Jamie looked at her, confused. It was then that Erin pushed her into the pool. "Now you can thank me." Erin said, as she crouched down to look at Jamie. Grumbling, Jamie reached up, and pulled Erin into the pool along with her."I guess that makes us even." Erin said, as she pushed her wet hair out of her face. She looked over at Jamie, who kind of stared at her for a bit, before Jamie started splashing.
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