This had a somewhat unexpected effect on the erotic content of the story. When I wrote Zentara, it was basically porn with a plot. I had a bunch of er...tic scenes in my head, and I wrote a story to connect them. With Rebellion, I had a story in my head, and had to tack on the erotic scenes almost as an afterthought. This led to them being a little more vanilla, as a whole, since they weren’t a big part of the story. I was also trying for a more realistic style, which led to the Jeanette behaving. I was going to cum and I suddenly realized I wanted her to succeed. I wanted her to catch every drop of my load. I wanted her to earn her way into my room. I wanted to fuck her. I needed to cum now. Jan, I’m going to cum. Get ready. Get it all. You’re doing great. She didn’t miss a beat. She drew her head up until she had just a couple of inches in her mount. Her right hand wrapped around my remaining length and her left hand began messaging my balls. With that, her hand and head began a. I was looking over the table, but I knew he was mesmerized by his daughter’s tight pussy. I began leaking like a broken tap at the thought of that alone! I put my hand down there and began rubbing my clit with my first two fingers. Daddy came up suddenly,looking even worse than before. I tried real hard to suppress my laughter.I kept my hand under there for a few more seconds, then took it out and licked the tip, tasting my own juices.“Do you like it, Daddy?” I askedHe looked so cute, all. “Come on, let’s go inside and let me take care of that bulge” he said, “or you’ll end up with aching balls!”He led me through to the change cubicles, and he selected the one right at the end, and we entered and he latched the door. My heart was pounding, and I was both excited and nervous as I watched him pull his shorts down.His cock was thick and veiny, and hung down like a sausage and it slowly began to rise, throbbing and hardening his foreskin pulling back and exposing the tip of his blood.