." My name fell from Lewis' mouth in between a gasp and a gulp.I came to my senses and stepped back. I knocked into his chest of drawers and regained ...y balance. I disappeared saying, "Sorry, Lewis."I went straight to my room. I thought I was going to have a cardiac arrest. My heart was playing the drum section of Metallica's "Whiplash". I sat down on my bed. I closed my eyes and tried to breathe deeply and calm myself. But as soon as I closed my eyes, all I saw was a manly torso and a huge. I had dated girls and fondled them, but I never had the courage to go any further than touching. I had only kissed one girl in my life. I was in the military. I was in law enforcement. I was on patrol one night and was doing a routine barracks walk through. I walked by an open door and could hear a woman moaning. I peaked into the room and saw this gorgeous woman on top of one guy and another behind and in her. The woman noticed me watching and smiled. I watched the three of them for about ten. Janice tried not to answer but the one word came out, “no!”.“why not,” asked Ginger. “I don’t like the idea, its not the right way,” she said.“Well we are going to change that” said Ginger, Janice could her the excitement in his voice, she felt sick at the idea of him penetrating her anus.“Take your shorts off” Janice had never wanted anything as badly she did now she wanted to stop herself taking her shorts off, once that happened there would be only her knickers protecting her from his. Not to insult you, but couldn't you do something about the punctuation and spelling though?I have a better idea, how about you voluntere damn how do you spell that anyway how about you offer to edit for me? Actualy, if I had to nitpick the story, My laziness would probably win, and there wouldn't be any story. I hope I do well enough that it is readable, and that I don't drive away too many souls. (waves cheerily to the readers) How is everything on your end? (shouting at the people reading.