I don't have a proofreader. I mean, I'd like one, but haven't had one come along, you know? (Write me at: [email protected] if you'd like to help ...ut here.) So every time I get back into working the story I make major changes, which of course makes finishing the story a longer process. But, my first time? Come on... how hard could that be? Everyone remembers his or her first time. But all the details? It took forever to finish this one. I hope you enjoy it.MY FIRST TIMEHere's the deal -- I. " How can I repay you?" I asked in earnest."Get her the hell out of the state as fast as you can, then file foradoption so they can't ship her back here." he tipped his hat and theystarted to leave.Samantha jumped up and hugged him, crying, "Thank you. I'll be a reallygood girl, I promise."He leaned down a bit on eye level with her. "I've always known you werea good girl sweetie. I'll tell Tammy that you're safe too."After they left, I said, "Well it looks like we should probably not takethe. I…" What was the rule, Tatum?" the girl sighed, then whined out her answer."If I did something big without asking you, I would get a spanking" Exactly, now go get the hairbrush from my sink, and come back here", said Melissa suddenly stern.“But mom that was when I was 10 and 11. I’m older now!”The look on Mellissa's face showed that argument could be dangerous. Tatum skulked off to her mother’s bathroom, thinking about why she had to tell her mom, and then remembering how hot she used to get. Knowing she wanted to savor the feel, I remained still for a long time. When I begin to move in her with slow short strokes she wrapped her legs around mine to halt my movements. “Don’t move, let me do it, this is what I want,” she whispered as she gripped and released my length. I laid still and let her have me, felling her grip and release. Each time I made the slightest movement she entwined my legs with hers and murmured, “don’t move, this is what I want!” She worked on me for ages, trying.