I do try but then I like detail as this helps the flow I feel ? Am I right ? An experienced writer may correct me there. It will get more exciting as...it progresses. Any tips or ideas I would appreciate. Please leave comments and I try my best. I am writing this live so it won't take long to post other chapters. Hope your enjoying this.It was three days since the night that John had met Janet and he hadn't had chance to call her. He was meaning to but work was hectic and he just didn't get. And Clifford.”“Well, that solves that dilemma. Just clean up before you make more sliders, babe,” I winked at Willa, not exactly condemning her actions in a society without courts of law.Jared and Ryan grabbed the bodies and carried them out to douse them with gasoline and set them ablaze. The cremation didn’t take long at all, though the twosome uttered barely audible prayers over the ashes of Cliff and Pamela. They then pissed on the ashes of the Klansmen, of course, washed their hands in the. .. you or Abby ... did you know her eyes take my breath away just like yours?”Sarah caressed my cheek, then moved and gave me a warm, gentle kiss, “I love you, Charlie, you silver-tongued devil. I can’t wait until we all have more time together. I love waking up in your arms and between your legs like this!” Giggle.We heard Mary giggling in our heads, “C’mon you two lovebirds, time to get up! Lenny just got here and we need to get ready for that press conference. Sarah has to finish. When I did she jumped a bit and turned to look back at me and asked if I had been awake the whole time. When I said yeah she slide off me and turned around and sat down on the edge of the couch and asked if I was mad at her. I asked her why I would be mad and she said because I pulled your shorts off to let her see you. I said that is what you wanted wasn't it, she leaned over and kissed me and said yes but I just didn't want you to be mad if I should you off to her like this. I told her after.