Make it cum for us." He leaned back on his haunches and pumped his glistening cock faster. " Oh fuck, I'm gonna cum." He cried out. " Oh yeah baby" I ...oaned louder as I moved up in front of him "Cum for us baby, shoot that sweet cum all over my pussy!" Judy quickly moved up beside me and as she got closer to him, her orgasm came rushing over her. Leaning back on her elbows and staring at his throbbing cock, she shoved her fingers up into her pussy and bucked her ass upward, grunting and moaning. Grabbing her skirt off of the mirror, she began to reach down to put it on, stopping when Max spoke up “I meant what I said, no skirts in my car, ever.”Her door opened, and like last week, Roach was again gathered with his boys, holding the door for her, and there was nothing for it but to get out of the car, stand there bare assed and pull on her skirt, blushing furiously the whole time.As Niki pulled up her skirt, her bare butt was exposed for a long moment as she stood in the open door of. Asach mi ek divas dupari tanchya gharat gelo hoto, pahato tar vahini palangavar zopali hoti aani tiche pay ghudgayt mudpalele aslyane tichi sadi mandi paryant var geli hoti. Tichya gorya mandya pahun maza lawadach tight zala. Mi halu-halu tichya mandivarun hat firvu laglo, kadachit vahinila te janawale asel pan tine zopeche song ghetele, mi halu halu tichya chaddi la sparsh karu laglo, Maya chya tondatun aaaa……hhhh ….h….aa..ase aawaz nighat hote, tyani mi azunach uttejit hot hoto, tichya. I don't have a problem with minor typos and more obscure grammatical errors, but you should always use capital letters at the beginning of a sentence, for proper nouns, and the word "I". Try not to use tense shifting, it's one of my pet peeves. Tense shifting is when you start a chapter in one tense and suddenly shift to another at a random point for no reason. As a general rule, this story is in present tense, unless you are using a flashback.Keep in mind that this story should be in second.