Seriously though, I am very impressed with just how better the chapter flows with his changes and suggestions.He does have some stories of his own her... on SOL if you want to check them out. https://storiesonline.net/a/Old_FartEnjoy!BluKal was a panicky wreck by the time Gerda brought them back up onto the trail not far from Ikuno’s pool. He had failed to realize that, even though Gerda ‘flew’ through the stone at a good pace, the trip back to Ikuno’s cave would still take nearly a full hour.. ’ That in itself raised an eyebrow, but my Father always told me to be beholden to no one. So I rang the shop and paid the bill in full over the phone, after all, I did it. My temper got in the way and it was time to pay for what I did, feeling very lucky that the police didn’t haul my ass down town for doing it. The bill was handed to Janice for filing and the rest of the day became work overload for everyone in the office. As far as I was concerned, the whole incident was nothing more than a. I was now in the year 1875. What the hell, if I was going to travel, and have time traveling ability, I might as well use all my resources.For some reason, I noticed that farmers were having trouble getting their crops out to market. It was pretty splotchy, but I recognized an attempt at market control when I saw it. Since I was nosy and had funds, I decided to stick my two cents worth in.I was in a small town in Iowa, of all places, when I back timed a few weeks. I rented the largest warehouse. "Well let me see it!" Jill said as she leaned over and started to rub my crotch. "It is hard, pull it out and lets have a look at it." I guessed it would not hurt to show my cock to Jill so I stood up and dropped my pants and my undies and let my cock spring fourth. My cock is about ten inches long and very thick with a large set of balls. "My goodness, my daughter can take that thing?" "Yes she likes it alot." I said as Jill examined my dong more closely. "Shit, look at the size of these.