All constructive comments (whether you like or dislike the story) would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading, -Rei ========[ THE STORY ]========...= ‘Did I ever tell you about the time I won a rat?’ Turning away from my computer, I look at her relaxing in my recliner, and try to recall having heard this story before. We have been together a year and a half now, and have told each other many, many stories from our lives. The deaths of parents (my father, her father and – much more recently –. I must have caught them getting started."Come down here and sit on the couch," Sarah called up to me. Yikes... busted, I was thinking. But then again, here was Heather cheating on me with another woman. I didn't have much to worry about. Heather looked back at me, mouth agape, not from being caught but from the joy of her nipples being pinched and twisted.I came downstairs and sat down next to them."That's pretty sneaky, watching us up there, not telling us you were there," Sarah. " I was saying.Val dropped one of the tater tots she had on a fork and responded with an, "About what?"She looked nervous, so I just said the first thing that came to mind, "I was wondering if you would like to, uh, go to a movie or go to the Ice Cream Palace some time. Or do something to ... uh."Val's face shifted from nervousness to a smile with a blush and she lowered her head and came closer to me and asked, "Are you asking me out? On a date? Because you actually like me." Then her face. ‘Please let me grab her and feed her? We’ll pick where we left off as soon as we’re done.’ ‘Shut up!’ Grabbing me around the throat he picked up his damaging pace, ‘She can wait, you are going to finish me now.’ Her wailing intensified, the pitiful cries had my eyes misting over. I could tell her cry was a sad one. It broke my heart not to go to her when she needed me. ‘Please?! Please Lu can’t you hear her? She’s alone and hungry. Let me soothe her. No baby should be left to cry when.