I am glad to do so,with the caveat that, of course, my suggestions are only that--suggestions--and with the understanding on my part that many otherwr...ters are equally or better adept at the same skills upon which Ihave been complimented. With these cautions in mind, let me offer mysuggestions, to be accepted or rejected as readers will.First, to depict character, a writer must know what is meant by theterm as it is used in fiction. Writers subscribe, as writers at least,to the trait theory of. Look into my eyes and kiss me hard. You've got tochannel all the old romance movies and you've got to be the guy."Howard did as he was told. He didn't feel comfortable and would havebeen more comfortable playing the woman being held and kissed. But hedid it because he needed to be the whole package.After class, they walked across by the library and went into a drugstore. Darlene picked out a dull brown hair rinse and they went back toAshley's to dye her hair.Darlene watched. "It's such a shame. The back door opened – I was amazed to see Dale and Sam, looking much hotter than their videos. I had barely sat down between them when Sam kissed me full on the lips, while Dale eased my shorts down over my skinny thighs and then came back up remove my tee-shirt. Soon I was as naked as everybody else in the car as it silently pulled away into the traffic.Looking around “what is this car – it’s beautiful”.Lola: “she’s my baby ‘model 3’ – probably the first in the country – I insisted the. Seeking comfort ... from me. Smirking as he put the two and two together, he wiped the water from his eyes. Anxious Suki = comfort from Dillon. Perfect.Self-satisfied, Dillon grabbed the soap he began washing down his body - cleaning the red, caked on remnants of the night away. As he watched the red tinged suds disappear down the drain, he decided he’d not be able to do the same with his shirt. That was now a prize that contained Suki’s DNA and deserved special treatment. He’d take it to bed.