That being said, I’m going to scale back Elfish Descent to just two POVs, and they are going to follow one main storyline, while each will have its ...wn side stories and plots. Along a similar line, the pacing was way off in the beginning of the story. Susannah’s chapters went too slow, and Cindy’s chapters went too fast. I should have better balanced out the Rebellion POVs. Unfortunately, I was posting a chapter every time I finished a chapter, which made it quite difficult to go back and fix. The smooth skin felt erotic and sensuous, the raunchy stench of man smell aroused him: the sweat, the piss, and the stink of an unwashed, uncut black cock was driving him mad. John’s mouth watered; he opened his lips, desperate to be fed some real stiff meat. He didn’t have to wait long. There was no need for prolonged foreplay or anything of the sort; the guy was there to get his dick sucked by a white guy. All the initial trepidation gone, John sucked. He got his face fucked and fucked. ”“Me too.”She released him and turned in his embrace, leaning back against Joe to look at her brother as he drew close, then she clapped her hands,“Gimme”Andy frowned and then realized she meant the ball and tossed it underhand at her, she caught it and bobbed it from one hand to the other, her volleyball skills on display as she kept the oval ball airborne for a while and then tossed it back at Andy. Andy on the other hand tossed it right back and she caught it again, chuckling,“You’re getting. I heart stopped. I added more lotion and rubbed more on,her ass was firm but her untanned skin felt soft. She let a soft moan out and said just like that. Feeling brave,I slipped my fingers under the fabric of her swimsuit. As I ran my hand down between her legs, she said that was enough for today. I had trouble hiding my erection while I swept the patio. When I was finished I asked if she needed anything else done. When she leaned up to look around, my eyes went straight to her chest. Looking.