. . I learned a lot from this story, mainly that you can’t please everyone, some hated the short parts and cliffhangers, some loved it. Some though... it was slow, some loved the characters going through the many circumstances that they went through. Some thought it was too much of a cliché but really, aren’t almost all romances? Some claimed that the characters should have figured it all out sooner, but remember written in third person, it gives the reader more information than the characters. Finally Jade broke the silence by introducing herself. “Good evening, sir. I am Jade and here for a bachelor party for a gentleman named Wyatt.”“Ah yes, my son. Please come in,” he said, stepping back, motioning her to come inside. “My name is Drake.”Jade stepped inside and looked around for a place to put her clutch. Drake took it out of her hand and laid it on it the entryway table, but Jade kept her messenger bag with her. She could hear several guys laughing and talking in another room.. She was essentially naked, except for a tiny cotton thong. He pinched her nipples and mauled her big tits while telling her that she was going to be his new sex toy. Anita was moaning like I had never heard before. She reached down with her other hand and cupped his balls as she slowly sank to her knees. She wrapped her lips around that giant swollen purple cockhead and Tyler told her a good girl should worship his cock…He asked if she wanted to feel his magic pole in her hot pussy. I then. There it was. My big black throbbing dick standing upright and proud, free and fully erect. Kristen couldn't help but take a quick sneak peek back to see the black appendage that would, in a moment's time, penetrate and sodomize her virgin anus."Oh my God" She whined in a silent whisper as she looked away. That evil smile of mine made its appearance once again.I inched closer to her ass, and squatted down. Her nice big lewd ass was now in front of me in its full glory. I was in awe once again.