As an example, I am really not very satisfied with how the Katerei and Gorath storyline played out. I fell into the Shyamalan trap of having a twist f...r the twists sake. By the time I got to chapter 11 or so, I realized that the big reveal that Kat and Gor were spies would have little to no pay off. What I should have done was make that clear up front, have Kat and Gor slowly begin to doubt their mission as they grew closer to Jeanette, before finally making the decision to defect and come. Oh, I pleasured myself a lot and even snuck into town to visit a lady of the evenin' ever once in a while, but the thought of another woman livin' in Cassie's house with Cassie's kids was too much for me.I tossed down the rest of my drink and headed back to bed. I sat on the edge fer a minute tryin' to relax my mind then I crawled under the blanket - and rolled over against a warm body."What the hell!" I said as I sat up and threw the covers back. The moonlight was bright enough fer me to. It was mid-morning, and the store was not busy. I noticed that the cubicles were not gender-specific. The assistant opened the curtain for me to enter, and casually closed it behind me.I took off my shoes, leaving my socks on, took off my shirt, dropped my trousers, and hung them on a hook, leaving me in my underpants. I selected a pair of shorts to try on and stood in front of a full-length mirror. I was about to step into the shorts when I noticed that a six to nine inch gap had been left. In my next story Jennifer is going to ride one of these, and I want Sally to ride it now so she can tell me how it feels, and I can then accurately describe Jennifer's feelings for the book."Sally groaned as Phil lifted her up and had Keith take one of her legs and put it over the other side of the beam! Then he and Keith carefully lowered Sally until she was straddling the beam, with her feet still well off the floor, her newly shaved pussy pressed hard against it! Phil drew her arms back and.