(Darkside) Followed up by some constructive remarks. I for one don't mind being told my stuff is crap, as long as I know why.(Elaine) Agreed Darkside,...you just need some comments, some feedback, anything! I do it myself though, I download a story to read later and I forget to post a comment, by the time you read it, it is too much trouble to get back in touch with the author and you feel awkward after such a long time!(Darkside) All authors need feedback, it's how we learn (well I do anyway).. Not that you’ve had much time to get unused, I suppose! Put your hands on top of your head-slave.” With a moan, Julia did so reluctantly. Melissa’s finger went into the neck of the pale blue blouse... and ripped it down to the waist. The tatters were tugged off Julia’s back. Then away went the brassiere... also pale blue. Rip... rip! Rip... rip! The black skirt was a tougher proposition, but didn’t last long. Little pale blue knickers... and a black suspender belt appeared. In a matter of. He moaned to her "Lets see how your tight ass likes a rough finger fuck." He then pushed another finger in her ass. He had every knuckle deep in her ass and then added still another finger. As he fucked her ass with his fingers he saw her cunt pulse and knew she was turned on. "You like that ass spanked and fucked don't you. I am going to fuck that ass hard but first I will fuck your mouth. Get down between my legs and open your mouth."As she kneeled between his legs he grabbed her head and. Me: yesSakshi: apki koi gf?Me: naah we broke upSakshi: sry, mera v kuch aisa hai mai jisse pyar krti thi wo mujhe time deta tha toh mai usse de-attached ho gayiMe: sry yaar same pinch…Sakshi: we look very good in selfiee na?Me: if u don’t mind we can be together tooSakshi: r u kidding?Me: sry.Sakshi: r u serious?Me: yesSakshi: I still can’t believe.. Please don’t kid with me I m emotionalMe: I love you, you are perfect for me.. We look perfect togetherSakshi: aww I love you too. I was attracted.