He lifted my dress and slip, and then pulled my panties to one side exposing my young asshole to both he and Sophie who commented, “nice pink hole, ...our boy pussy looks very fuckable, right Fanny?” We were facing away from Sophie so she could not see, so came by our side, still feeling her pussy to get a better look and feel. Fanny was feeling my ass, putting some KY on it, then putting his cock head up to my asshole as Sophie rolled onto the bed and put her face under mine and started to kiss. You don't listen to them speak, so you can't write dialogue. If you want to get better at writing, first you have to get better at watching and listening."For the first time, something he said made some sense."Try something for me. Choose someone you know. Write their diary. As if they were writing it. Watch what they do. Listen to what they say. Don't make anything up. Just record it. Describe what's going on around them if you need to but let their actions and words speak for themselves. Do. “Jaidyn, they tell me you did a great job of choosing your assistants, I’m proud of you,” I told her as she ran to my side and hugged her hard body to me.“Murphy, they were both just like me. They were trying to make it in this world where a girl has to watch her every move and save every penny.They were barely making it on what they made working in those stores and I knew how that felt. I wanted them to have what you all gave me. I hope you like them. I think I already love both of them,” she. I put my mouth on her one nipple and with my one hand started pressing the other.She was moaning and shouting harder and harder. Her face was getting red. I started sucking it real hard and milk started flowing of her lovely breast. She said drink every drop as it will help me to fuck her. She said drink the milk then fuck me in my ass. I was also getting very excited as she will allow me to fuck her ass.After sucking in her breast for 15 mins she said now I want to suck your cock. I get naked.