Making your reader hard or wet is the first step. Anyone can write, “and then he thrust hard and came inside of my pussy.” Yawn. This is one end o... the scale: making your story just about the sex. Maybe if you’re really good at writing the sex scenes, you’ll get a lot of viewers that come to your story looking to get off. Then after they’ve finished, they’ll close the tab in shame and get on with their lives. If that’s your end goal, you don’t need my pretentious opinion. You do you, space. She was mewing softly in pleasure as I continued to lick and kiss her. I was getting quite excited myself at this stage, sucking and licking a beautiful girl’s bottom and anus is a great turn-on for me, especially when I hope to take them later. (Having said this however, I enjoy doing it even if I don’t get to do so). I moved directly to her tight little rosebud with my tongue, first coating it with plenty of saliva (not good enough for a penis but OK for tongue or finger). At first I. Looking into my eyes, JR said, "Jackie, I love you!"Unable to speak, I nodded, letting JR know I loved him too. I was still on the brink of climax and needing him to finish me off. JR leaned down, placing his lips against mine. His kiss was soft and his tongue swiped across my lips. I felt the bed shifting under me, but the intensity of JR's kiss masked the unfamiliar movements. JR removed his mouth from mine. When I opened my eyes, I was staring into his. I was also looking up at a. It was cloudy since morning but it had not rained although the meteorologists had predicted some heavy rain. Anyway, I reached Manhattan parked and got to his apartment. He was sweet as usual, very happy to see me, perky that his ass will be getting a ponding, he deserved from my 8+ inches thick cut cock. We got out, walked to the Italian eatery in the village and enjoyed our dinner. By the time we were coming back home, the clouds had thickened and as he was using the key to get into the.