Take a breath. Anywhere you take a breath put in a comma. I still sometimes wonder if I use the semicolon correctly; such as here?I became a drawing f...end in my class this year. I would draw top down views of little cars on race tracks. I would even draw 'damaged' cars in wrecks on the speedway.I know this was my dad watching the Auto Races on TV. The influence was very strong.There was more yelling between my parents. And they did not seem to care at this point if any of us kids were in. She could barely keep her eyes open, but the infomercial about the great new kitchen appliance was too good to be missed. Bree’s creative flow surged in abundance during the night hours, so that’s when she worked. She was actually winding down from her work day. Keyes would be getting up for his if it wasn’t Saturday, though she was sure she heard him say he had some work to go over, the night before; but she couldn’t remember a thing really as sleep was about to take her anytime now. “Fuck!. The first two were an agency. I hung up after listening to them. The next was a wrong number. There was only one left. I decided to go upstairs and get something to eat before I called. It was about an hour later that I called the last number. Ring! Ring! A few seconds later….Hello! This is Charlene. How can I help you? said a sexy female voice. Hi! My name Buck Kelly! I got your number off your online Ad. I said. Oh! Thanks my long distance is good. she said. No! Im not with the phone company.. Shilpa: oh but would be the envy of the ladies in the supermarket.Me: put on some lace for me later?Shilpa: I am so gonna stick a vibrator up my pussy now.Me: oh babyShilpa: so super wetMe: I wanna fuck you, hard baby.Shilpa: I am gonna eat your cock later, miss you so muchMe: eat my precum baby.Shilpa: are you driving? I better not disturb you.Me: I am stroking my cock baby.Shilpa: Ohh wish I can have you in me right now!Me: I am gonna cum in your face.Shilpa: my pussy is aching for you bad.