So feel free to weigh in, most Constructive Reader, let me know what you do and don't like. Shoot me any ideas or directions you might have. They have...certainly helped in the past and I welcome the interaction.Full disclosure; I am considering moving some of my writing to other online platforms. All open-access and free-to-read, of course. The stories published here will be my unwitting test material as I check out different sites by posting them there. Otherwise, have fun. I'll drop writers. The kind of weather that stops customers from heading to your pub, no matter if the heating was on full and the beer was good...I moved from my usual spot in the hatch to get a closer look at the rain bouncing up off the pavement, but also to break some of the palpable tension between us. We’d worked together for some time now, and had become firm friends with a hint of mutual attraction that reared its flirtatious head in shared conversations, furtive glances across the room, and the. "Oh I do," purred Rita. Before Chris could come up with a better comeback the passengers began to deplane and the partners stepped up to examine them."There they are," Chris gestured towards a duo coming down the jet-way."Quite a contrast," commented Rita.Chris nodded. The male topped 6 feet by a couple of inches. His black hair was cut in a very short, military style. Around 200 pounds, his body gave the impression of strength. He was neatly, if conservatively, dressed in dark blue slacks and. Then there were complaints that Imade the main character too young, so to avoid any (unwarranted)accusations of kiddie-porn, I upscaled all the ages. This latestversion is now over 100 pages long (so far.) I hope you enjoy this newimproved version. BJChapter 1 Punished at Aunty June'sWhen I was fifteen years old, my mother decided that rather thanspending my summer vacation languishing at home in the city, I shouldinstead stay with my mother's divorced younger sister in the country.My.