.. um, you can call me either one you want."She stared at him blankly. Why, she thought, would it matter?"Yeah..." he continued awkwardly. He pushed ...is bangs out from his right eye. "Well, we were talking and, um, wondering, I guess-" Sauce, you're fucking terrible at this. Just chill out and let me talk." Zack cleared his throat and faced the girl. "First, where did you come from, Renee?"Easy."Outside." ... before that." A factory." No, I mean," he took a deep breath and thought for a. In the original I wrote, 'She licked her lips at the sight of his massive, purple-veined cock, standing stiffly erect, with the candle-light glistening off the trail of pre-cum that ran down its shaft and dripped onto her naked belly.'"I couldn't believe that I was listening to her soft sexy voice speak these words or that her imagination had created them. Her manner was very proper as she read, like that of a student presenting her essay to the class, and this made it almost unbearably sexy. This was unusual for her as it was still early in the morning. I quietly got up and listened at our partly open door. I could hear him talking quietly and her giggling from down in the kitchen. Almost immediately they appeared with their arms around each other's waists, and the bulge in his boxers left no doubt what they were about to do, as they headed down the basement stairs.I wanted to sneak down and watch but it was light out now and I was afraid of getting caught so I grabbed her overly. I wasn't aroused, but merely attracted to her on a personal level. Belatedly, I realized that my effect had never even gotten flipped to the "on" position during our entire date.It was when I recognized how much I was enjoying myself without the crutch of my effect clouding a girl's mind that the wave of desire first hit me. It wasn't love, but it wasn't really lust either. Still, Marissa had me wanting her as much as I'd ever wanted a girl before in my life.And when that wave of desire washed.