"daughter" "mother" and all female relatives make for good titles. add "slut" "slave" or "whore" for good measure. people writing in gay genre ignore ...oint 1.2. again I say, make it short. like a miniskirt, but not like a dick. if you can't, make an apealing title and add the rest in subtitle.3. add tags, lots of them don't overtly abuse them, but even if a hint is there, go for it. as one author put it, tags are free ad-boards. 4. always know your genre. don't post in dark fantasy if its about. For a moment she looked at me and turned away to get some water. I had to make the call now. Somehow I mustered all the courage I could. The alcohol inside me helped. As I was sitting in a couch, she brought be the water in a tray and bent down to given me the same. I grabbed both her hands and she fell on top of me. I immediately kissed her hard the lips. She was struggling. Her boobs were hitting my chest hard and I could feel the warmth of her body. Quickly without wasting time I took out my. . imma leave now." Yesssss baby alright I'm going to leave the key under the mat just let yourself in" Seanna said as she hung up the phone placed the key under the mat and went to the shower. She couldn't resist touching herself. Even before she stepped into the shower her pussy was dripping wet from all the thoughts of finally getting Devon to fuck her. They've touched and felt each other before and once reluctantly eat her pussy, well he wanted to he just wanted something in return. She was. If you are offended by such activities, do not read any further. This is purely a fantasy. Any resemblance to any person, living or dead is consensual or purely coincidental. Thanks go out to Ashley for inspiration and feedback.Please send any comments/suggestions to me at [email protected]. They are appreciated and warmly received.This story may be reposted or archived provided that the story is not altered in any way, the story contains my name and disclaimer, and you do not make money.