These just need a bit of tightening up. Ever read, ‘Elements of Style?” She asked. ‘Yeah, in school. Didn’t get a lot out of it,’ Penny said... picking up the stack. ‘It’s kind of a bible. Might be worth thumbing through again. Your work is solid, it really is, Penny. I think you should be submitting stories to some of the shorter romantic magazines as soon as you clean them up some.’ Penny looked at her, ‘you mean it?’ ‘Oh yes. You might even Google for some information about the independent. I don’t know how many people could see this, but one thing is for sure, the guy and his mate could! One of the bar staff then came over to serve me and I removed my hand. As I was being served, the guy moved a little closer to her and just basically put his hand up the front of her skirt, pushing it so high you could see her knickers and put his hand down the front of her knickers and started frigging her off. We were right up to the bar and how crowded the bar was, no one else maybe could. I was soused to holding mine, that when I realized I couldn't quite wrap myfinger around his shaft I whispered a faint Oh My God! I started liftingit out and it got heavier and heavier the further I pulled it out. Itwas impossibly big. Finally, his head cleared his zipper and he poppedout into my small hand and it leaned heavily to one side, it's swollenand mostly stiff mass hot and throbbing in my hand. For a few seconds Ijust sat there, holding it, while I felt it swell and stiffen. He. I was aware that beneath the britches she wore her customary appendage for it was I who with great pleasure had thus equipped her. She had stroked it lasciviously and said, ‘I wonder if the lady-in-waiting is waiting for this, my love.’ We had giggled together for I knew that whether or not Lady Rampton was, I most assuredly was as, of course, did Maria. Lady Rampton invited Maria to join her on the chaise and occasionally I glanced in their direction but was anxious not to appear rude to any.