While there are other schools of thought, this is a very valid criticism. So how should the very best erotic stories go about balancing their sexual c...ntent with their ability to be a story? On a scale of 0 to 100 in writing talent, it takes about a 2 to just write sex. All you need to know about how to write sex is to know the action, then swap synonyms (so like instead of ‘he stuck his penis inside of her,’ create ‘he drilled her with his iron rod.’ Magic.) There’s a great number of stories. It was a huge turn-on for both of us to watch Itsuffering in the hot sun. After I fucked her ass, therewas a big glob of shit on my dick, and Shannon balkedat taking my cock in her mouth and I had to beat her alittle bit. I was really looking forward to trainingher up properly.When we were done and cleaned up, we went back out tothe back yard. It had finished excavating the area thatShannon had staked out, and was laying on her back inthe rectangular hole, just as I had instructed. Shelooked up. He assumed this was how it should be. And, lo, what he had seen of the world was good and right, and he had no reason to believe that it should ever be otherwise. Indeed, he had not been especially unhappy in the time before Eve arrived. He had plenty to do in exploring the grottoes and woods and ponds and streams of the garden. There were so many interesting and beautiful things to see and he knew all of them by name. As well he might, as there were no names before he granted them to the. .I was in the wood shed today getting all sweaty and dirty as I had to find something to fill my mind-I imagined how we might be there .................. It was a saturday afternoon .I knew you were coming over and decided that to keep occupied I would chop some wood and keep busy-already my mind was filled with thoughts of how later we would be and the night ahead was to provide untold and new pleasures as we got to know each others likes and desires-would you be wearing that black negligee or.