When making a chapter, be as descriptive as possible.Please try and use proper grammar. I don't have a problem with minor typos and more obscure gramm...tical errors, but you should always use capital letters at the beginning of a sentence, for proper nouns, and the word "I". Try not to use tense shifting, it's one of my pet peeves. Tense shifting is when you start a chapter in one tense and suddenly shift to another at a random point for no reason. As a general rule, this story is in present. "Oh. I see." Pause. "Yes, that's in the book ... Yes ... Right away."She turned back, red-faced. "Chairman Booth. I beg your pardon. Your suite is booked and paid for. Your companion?" Joshua Sutherland. With Ms Butcher." Yes, sir. You have a suite. Um ... will you be all right sharing the suite? – there are two standard doubles in each bedroom..." That sounds fine," the Chairman stated after a glance at Joshua, who nodded. Keys were handed to the two men, and they headed upstairs to dump. Kym then led the group to the patio and pool to meet the guys who had been swimming. Scott was in his 30's with dyed blond hair and a swimmers build. David, also in his 30's had a shaved head. The last one we got to meet wasStewart, Todd and Mark’s boy. Stewart would have been in his early 20's, had a solid wrestlers body, a crew cut of black hair. His eyes were a captivating brown and his arms like tree trunks. "I've been looking forward to meeting you, Clay, after all of what Todd and Mark. Failed to keep her safe.The adrenalin began to wear off, leaving him shaky and weak. Every cut and wound began to pulse and scream across his battered body. Blood still spattered on the ground from his many wounds. He did not remember falling.Logan woke to pain from countless wounds. His eyes were slow to focus as he opened them to look down at Beauty’s wealth of white hair and feel the soft, warm touch of her tongue licking one of his wounds. He was naked except for yards of bandage wrapped.