"More?" she asked in a low, sexy voice."Yes!" I croaked out through my suddenly dry mouth.Reaching between her breasts she fumbled for a moment then t...e bra went loose, the cups dropped away from her tits and I stared enraptured at the first truly naked boobs I had ever seen. I barely noticed her shrugging off the bra so intent was I on absorbing every facet of her tits, she spoke again and although I nodded I really have no idea what it was she had said, but her next action was to slide her. Opyright 2004 by LVWolfman, All rights reserved - June 29, 2003ForwardWelcome to my first published fiction (other than perhaps my resume.)While I'm a fan of erotic mind control stories, I've noticed that many of the first published stories by amateur authors fall into this genre and use many of the same cliches. This was recently explained to me as being the "Hello World!" of erotic literature. (For those with no programming experience, the reference books for almost every programming language. Pulling into secluded picnic spots, frantically removing their clothes, scrambling over seats, or even those few occasions when she had run from the car giggling, her tits bouncing wildly, until he had caught her, laid her on a picnic table and fucked her. How she had clawed at his back, urging him on, legs wrapped around him as they humped together.Harry realised he was wanking furiously, his daughter’s thong pressed against his face, then, suddenly he felt his orgasm building, holding Jenny’s. Cum flooded out of her swollen cunt hole and dripped down her thighs, joining the juices already smeared there. The smell of cum filled the air as the thick, dreamy stuff slowly oozed down her inner thighs in wet clumps. She grunted once more, loudly, and then the spasms stopped. Ohhhh, fuck! she declared. Just keep sucking, honey. Ohh, yeah … thats how to do it! It wont be long now, baby, he urged, his voice rising, not if you keep that up … uuunnmmm … oh! Janies brain cleared and she went.