Not to insult you, but couldn't you do something about the punctuation and spelling though?I have a better idea, how about you voluntere damn how do y...u spell that anyway how about you offer to edit for me? Actualy, if I had to nitpick the story, My laziness would probably win, and there wouldn't be any story. I hope I do well enough that it is readable, and that I don't drive away too many souls. (waves cheerily to the readers) How is everything on your end? (shouting at the people reading. "Yeah," he said. You look different, somehow."She led him to the bar and brushed her hip against his thigh when she went around to pour him a drink. "Do I look sexy?"He nodded, the n frowned. "But you always did. It was like icing on a cake, but empty inside; no goodies beyond the froth."Lauralee leaned over the bar top and the gown fell apart to give him a good look at her breasts. "I didn't know, Marshall. Now I do. Here's to knowing."Drinking hurriedly, he said, "I don't know what the hell. The beautiful girl at the front had turned ashen faced. The plump ugly girl was close to tears.I informed the girls that they were to report promptly to the punishment classroom of the day for their sex. This was often my classroom. Girls and boys were punished in private, so they would have to wait till I did not have a class to teach. The waiting could be awful. Pupils were punished alone, which suited my rather liberal 'style' as we will see.I explained that the girls would be required to. I did not think she would wanna chill with me because im not the most popular. But to my surprise she was happy to come over. Now this girl is 6'' with HUGE 36dd boobs, an ass to die for and an awesome face. When she got to my house I put in a movie and made some pop corn. Tonight she was wearing the shortest skirt I have ever seen which when I could I looked up and saw her thong. On one of my looks up her skirt she must have like moved her body or something because one her her pussy lips came.